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Bhaern Quel wrote: ↑Mon Apr 21, 2025 6:32 pm So how tall is he? Is he thin and nimble, or perhaps a little more steady and firm. Of course his hair colour is the same as his eyes, or maybe not.

Of course being a free spirit he wears nothing except the harp.

A descpriction should include vital stats. Also I will move this to OOC.

Bhaern Quel wrote: ↑Tue Apr 22, 2025 12:46 am Well knowing his traits are good, there is not much others can help you with that. It is your character concept.

At best we good offer edit ideas about your vision. Unless you want our ideas about what your character traits should be.

Zeky'rith wrote: ↑Mon Apr 21, 2025 6:22 pm Zeknarzt is a kind soft-spoken, compassionate soul, who is eager to help others, especially those in need. Whether with divine powers, lending a sympathetic ear, or even with his sword if absolutely necessary. He has a bright mind, and can often be seen reading a book, whether that be an epic or a dry tome about the history of the Lute, or debating the finer points of theology and magical theory. He also has a deep appreciation of music, and possess some musical talent himself, as he’s quite skilled with the Lute, which he uses to entertain and heal.

Drathiranon wrote: Well done on the personality aspect of Zeknarzt! Your writing is descriptive and spot on from a story telling perspective!

Most of us come from different parts of the world so clarity becomes important when communicating ideas. We're a friendly and patient bunch so no worries! You are doing fine.

Verlansia Arseaniamaen wrote:Personality and interests description looks great! A likeable kind of Drow!

Zeky'rith wrote: ↑Mon Apr 21, 2025 11:44 pm

Bhaern Quel wrote: ↑Mon Apr 21, 2025 6:32 pm So how tall is he? Is he thin and nimble, or perhaps a little more steady and firm. Of course his hair colour is the same as his eyes, or maybe not.

Of course being a free spirit he wears nothing except the harp.

A descpriction should include vital stats. Also I will move this to OOC.

Thanks! I'm trying to create a D&D character sheet, so I wrote a description of just his personality traits, rather than a overall description. I guess I should have specified. I was going to work on his physical traits next, after I finished with his personality (and ideals, bonds, etc.)

Zeknarzt is a young dark elf (25). Charcoal skin covers his lean, and nimble average height (5’ 8”) frame. He has soft, crimson-colored eyes, and long silvery hair, which is shaved on the right side. Zeknarzt has a delicate face, with sharp attractive features. A thin scar, courtesy of his elder brother, runs from under the outer corner of his left eye, down to just above his mouth.

He wears silver-colored chain-mail armor, that bears the symbol of Eilistraee on its front. A silver longsword earring, at the end of silver-colored chain, hangs from his right ear. He also usually wears a simple black cloak over his armor, so he can pass unnoticed if need be, since a dark elf, even a follower of Eilistraee, doesn’t always get the warmest of welcomes. A rapier and shield, along with his trusty lute, hangs at Zeknarzt’s back.

Bhaern Quel wrote: ↑Mon May 12, 2025 10:33 pm Drow height tends to be smaller than other elves, however it depends what source and edition you want to use..

Drow height 4' 5 " + 2d6 " Making average 4'7" to 5' 5" 3rd & 5th I beleive

(5' tall) is 2nd Edition
5´ 4˝–6´ 0˝ 4th Edition

Also FR Drow were different from base D&D Drow IIRC

Zeky'rith wrote: ↑Mon Apr 21, 2025 6:22 pm Hey, so... I wrote a description for my character, Zeknarzt and I would appreciate some feedback. Here's what I got:

Zeknarzt is a kind soft-spoken, compassionate soul, who is eager to help others, especially those in need. Whether with divine powers, lending a sympathetic ear, or even with his sword if absolutely necessary. He has a bright mind, and can often be seen reading a book, whether that be an epic or a dry tome about the history of the Lute, or debating the finer points of theology and magical theory. He also has a deep appreciation of music, and possess some musical talent himself, as he’s quite skilled with the Lute, which he uses to entertain and heal.

This is me trying to be short. lol Ugh, brevity is not my strong suit.

Thanks in advance!