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Posted: **Fri Dec 19, 2008 5:20 pm**

This is my first story an i would love some construtive critisium please.
Thank you.

Posted: **Fri Dec 19, 2008 11:51 pm**

Well I do not yet see much to comment on on your first post (on Jun 07, 2007) of the story.

comments for my story The Trail of the Drow.