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The Crimson Prince

Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 9:42 am
by atiguy
I am a broken prince
For a broken land
Driven to the end of life
I seek retribution for my loss
The loss of my sanity
The loss of my livelihood
I have no hope
No chance at redemption
How am I to live I ask
I promised redemption
But I have fallen to far
I fight..fight to die
But before that happens
I’ll burn all life in crimson fire
I am but a broken prince
For a broken land
Driven to the end of life
And I shall have retribution

Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 9:40 am
by Shir'le E. Illios
Interesting poem. :)


Love -x-x-x-

Shir'le

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 1:47 am
by Thalon Mercrow
indeed i always enjoy the darker poams(like those of edger allen poe my favrite poet)to the light fluffy happy ones.

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 4:18 pm
by Argoth
This one is good.