OOC for Nymaru Island
Moderators: Shir'le E. Illios, Bhaern Quel
Nedy, just in case you didn't see your email yet, this are some of the maps of your island. Look at the mails to read the explanation on everything.
First, the town:
[center:2yr6s0pr][img:2yr6s0pr]http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k294/ ... ngtown.jpg[/img:2yr6s0pr][/center:2yr6s0pr]
Now the island, in colour:
[center:2yr6s0pr][img:2yr6s0pr]http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k294/ ... sland1.jpg[/img:2yr6s0pr][/center:2yr6s0pr]
Now a topographical map, this one in black and white:
[center:2yr6s0pr][img:2yr6s0pr]http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k294/ ... raphic.jpg[/img:2yr6s0pr][/center:2yr6s0pr]
A view:
[center:2yr6s0pr][img:2yr6s0pr]http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k294/ ... ru/B-B.jpg[/img:2yr6s0pr][/center:2yr6s0pr]
Another view:
[center:2yr6s0pr][img:2yr6s0pr]http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k294/ ... ru/A-A.jpg[/img:2yr6s0pr][/center:2yr6s0pr]
Any questions? I'll gladly answer them through here
First, the town:
[center:2yr6s0pr][img:2yr6s0pr]http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k294/ ... ngtown.jpg[/img:2yr6s0pr][/center:2yr6s0pr]
Now the island, in colour:
[center:2yr6s0pr][img:2yr6s0pr]http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k294/ ... sland1.jpg[/img:2yr6s0pr][/center:2yr6s0pr]
Now a topographical map, this one in black and white:
[center:2yr6s0pr][img:2yr6s0pr]http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k294/ ... raphic.jpg[/img:2yr6s0pr][/center:2yr6s0pr]
A view:
[center:2yr6s0pr][img:2yr6s0pr]http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k294/ ... ru/B-B.jpg[/img:2yr6s0pr][/center:2yr6s0pr]
Another view:
[center:2yr6s0pr][img:2yr6s0pr]http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k294/ ... ru/A-A.jpg[/img:2yr6s0pr][/center:2yr6s0pr]
Any questions? I'll gladly answer them through here
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Wow, that is amazing.
Great job there. Those maps looks great.
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Shir'le
Great job there. Those maps looks great.
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Shir'le
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[quote:7bg3f0ka].i was thinking of storm there[/quote:7bg3f0ka]
I would sudjest changing the post to indicate the guard reported to Storm rather then the blacksmith. It is of course up to you, not something I should cause to happen.
It does not scan well that the blacksmith would be toyal connected and conducting his skills outside the castle. It clear does not scan well that a guard would address a blacksmith as Sir.
A guard would tend to use citzen if he did not know name.
Royal blood of course can result in younger bloodlines becoming blacksmiths, so a relation can exisit to the Queen. Such a relaltionship however would tend to have little to no rank.
As you will, my character wants off the island *G*
I would sudjest changing the post to indicate the guard reported to Storm rather then the blacksmith. It is of course up to you, not something I should cause to happen.
It does not scan well that the blacksmith would be toyal connected and conducting his skills outside the castle. It clear does not scan well that a guard would address a blacksmith as Sir.
A guard would tend to use citzen if he did not know name.
Royal blood of course can result in younger bloodlines becoming blacksmiths, so a relation can exisit to the Queen. Such a relaltionship however would tend to have little to no rank.
As you will, my character wants off the island *G*
though it was an error it was a useable one..keep in mind relatively speaking that the nymaru are a young race they havent been around very long and seeing as how most of them live on the island many of them are related..so getting past the grotesque conversation of inbreeding, lol...but if it bothers everybody I can fix it...
oh and bhaern as soon as we all get caught up..aka sabaal and her party make it back to the castle and sabaal meets up with a certain gentleman who may be joining the party..which wont take long..if all are in agreeance we can speed through the ship's repairs and get you all off the island and onto the mainland.
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My role is not to change thw story, just posted concerns about it.
Only reason it should be changed IMO is if Sabaal does not like the change to her character backgound.
As for my captain getting off the island in many ways, at least right now, he would perfer getting off the island without new passengers. He will of course honor the deal.
One problem we might soon face is that Raven (1st mate) appears to be missing. Has been missing for some time now. To combine threads we might have to play around him.
Only reason it should be changed IMO is if Sabaal does not like the change to her character backgound.
As for my captain getting off the island in many ways, at least right now, he would perfer getting off the island without new passengers. He will of course honor the deal.
One problem we might soon face is that Raven (1st mate) appears to be missing. Has been missing for some time now. To combine threads we might have to play around him.
I don't really care if my character is or not related to the Willowsongs, I think it could make sense for what the prince told to my character in one of the first posts that my character had an important role in what was about to happen.
I'd really like to speed up things too and get into adventures soon. I have been trying to contact Quel, but I see him offline but doesn't answer. I guess he's working, and I guess he's starting to get a little bored, so if we can speed up things untill we all meet in the main thread again I think he'd catch us there.
I'd really like to speed up things too and get into adventures soon. I have been trying to contact Quel, but I see him offline but doesn't answer. I guess he's working, and I guess he's starting to get a little bored, so if we can speed up things untill we all meet in the main thread again I think he'd catch us there.