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<r><FONT font="Times New Roman, serif"><s>[font=Times New Roman, serif]</s><SIZE size="117:j2fnkzq1"><s>[size=117:j2fnkzq1]</s>[t:j2fnkzq1]“Were is that worthless priestess now” demanded Matron Neerwiira’myr Zaughym <br/> [t:j2fnkzq1]“We can’t find her” one priestess said.<br/> [t:j2fnkzq1]“Here I a...

This is my first story an i would love some construtive critisium please.
Thank you.

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Mainly fighting the world by ManOWar but also live and learn from sonic adventer 2 battle and Garbage from Duke Nukem 3d

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